Oh, I like it! There were some lovely lines in this - the constant reminder of the tap and the window bringing the room into full focus, the "Ring my Bell" connected to Pavlov made me giggle, and what was the other thing? *looks up*

Oh yes; the naturalness of the sex: the thought out little things that made it - the fact that when Andy reaches down it's awkward because it's the wrong hand. Such a human thing it almost made it.

Also, meow. Nice work Tosh.