ext_93758 ([identity profile] dancing-in-time.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] notevery 2007-01-28 02:16 am (UTC)

Oh, yay! I can't even begin to say how much I adored this. But what really stood out to me, besides the awesomeness that is Ianto/Tosh, was your use of the tiniest details, details that writers so often overlook. Like when Tosh's fingertips brushed Ianto's palm when passing over the garlic and the way her hair dripped down her back after her bath. Details like that make everything so much more real and thus turn a good fic into something magical. You've definitely done that. ;)

I was smiling so much throughout this fic, so amazing! Please for the sake of all the undernourished Ianto/Tosh fans, write more!

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