Thanks for your opinion -- I'll think on it a bit. I'm still in two minds over it myself, and it's interesting to know that it's a subjective thing. Also nice to know that my original attention of establishing a tighter continuity didn't miss the mark.
Thanks for the review, too! I entirely agree about Gwen and Owen being everything short of cosy: after all, Owen is not a big cuddly teddybear (picking up people with pheromone spray, anyone?), and I don't think that Gwen would instantly forget Rhys when presented with a naked Owen -- no matter how lovely that might be!
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Date: 2006-11-22 10:10 pm (UTC)Thanks for the review, too! I entirely agree about Gwen and Owen being everything short of cosy: after all, Owen is not a big cuddly teddybear (picking up people with pheromone spray, anyone?), and I don't think that Gwen would instantly forget Rhys when presented with a naked Owen -- no matter how lovely that might be!