Hi! First of all, I speak spanish, and I'm sorry about my english, I know it's no good, it's really bad, but I'll try to do my best.
It's an excellent work. Very well written, the charactes are so real, so deep... And not just the characters, one self can fell the strained atmosphere in the spaceship, the feeling of dying slowly...
You say that this story is "Porn with a (mini) plot"... but I see so many things there, so many feelings, so many thoughts, that this is not just porn!! THIS IS VERY GOOD PORN!! AND WITH A PLOT!!
The only thing that make me feel a little sad it's the buried bitterness that comes along with us in the story and burst in the end. I always feel that is necesary a little redemption, something that make us think that there's hope out there... But THAT is the power of your work. And you must be proud of it.
THANK YOU, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! YOU MAKE MY DAY!!!
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branchandroot
Amazing!!
Date: 2007-06-13 09:34 pm (UTC)It's an excellent work. Very well written, the charactes are so real, so deep...
And not just the characters, one self can fell the strained atmosphere in the spaceship, the feeling of dying slowly...
You say that this story is "Porn with a (mini) plot"... but I see so many things there, so many feelings, so many thoughts, that this is not just porn!! THIS IS VERY GOOD PORN!! AND WITH A PLOT!!
The only thing that make me feel a little sad it's the buried bitterness that comes along with us in the story and burst in the end. I always feel that is necesary a little redemption, something that make us think that there's hope out there... But THAT is the power of your work. And you must be proud of it.
THANK YOU, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! YOU MAKE MY DAY!!!