I'm so glad to hear that! I can never decide if the porn I write is going to work or not, so it's great to hear it did--and especially that the development you commented on was there; I had a really strong idea of this slow building progression through the three scenelets.
(And yeah, the 'sir' thing? Phoar. Every time Ianto calls Jack 'sir' a little bit of me melts.)
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Date: 2007-10-23 10:21 am (UTC)(And yeah, the 'sir' thing? Phoar. Every time Ianto calls Jack 'sir' a little bit of me melts.)