Thank you so much for such a detailed comment! I'm incredibly flattered! The specific details you picked up too were exactly what I wanted most to use/convey: the many small details, the very slow progression of emotions. I really can't describe how flattered I am that you enjoyed it so much--that's high praise indeed! Thank you!
(I know what you mean: usually I don't read fics that are sex-less unless they're very, very highly recommended to me by people I trust. I actually intended there to be explicit sex at the end of this, but when I reached it I decided that it was unnecessary, that the final line conveyed all that was important.)
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Date: 2007-12-27 01:06 pm (UTC)(I know what you mean: usually I don't read fics that are sex-less unless they're very, very highly recommended to me by people I trust. I actually intended there to be explicit sex at the end of this, but when I reached it I decided that it was unnecessary, that the final line conveyed all that was important.)