ext_3916: (Torchwood: Jack/Ianto touch)
ext_3916 ([identity profile] tonko-ni.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] notevery 2006-11-25 08:01 pm (UTC)

I love the end. Everything's not perfect, there're still traumas and ragged edges, but maybe it's a little better than before.

I liked when Ianto got angry enough to pin Jack down. Really liked. HOT. ::fans self:: Ianto oughta do that more.

And this:
After its night on the floor the garment is crumpled, creased: in it, Ianto feels more revealed, more vulnerable, more naked than he ever felt last night – last night when Jack was thrusting into him, groaning against his ear, last night when Jack came deep inside of him and they collapsed together in a puddle of limp limbs and come, when Ianto fell asleep with Jack’s hand lazily stroking his belly.

alksfghdjgslkfj sorry, I broken now. Too much hot.

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