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Does anyone feel like beta reading a fic for me? It's a filthy piece of Tosh/Andy pr0n that jumped on me out of the blue. More het for Torchwood, pls!
I think my grammar and spelling are usually pretty solid, so the areas I'm most looking for help with would be:
As I said it's Tosh/Andy, totally PWP, slightly AU (it's hard to make PWP canon in this scenario), and is basically one giant scene of a sexual nature with very slight d/s themes. Once I've finished doing my rough-draft readover I think it'll stand at about 4,000 words.
There is Andy. On his knees. In the kitchen. That was enough to sway me over to the dark side, at least.
Teaser snippet under the cut. Adult-tastic and with a totally gratuitous use of science and popular culture. (Oh dear.)
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( Her fingers tighten in his hair. “I'm waiting.” )
I think my grammar and spelling are usually pretty solid, so the areas I'm most looking for help with would be:
- Andy's voice/consistent viewpoint
- momentum
As I said it's Tosh/Andy, totally PWP, slightly AU (it's hard to make PWP canon in this scenario), and is basically one giant scene of a sexual nature with very slight d/s themes. Once I've finished doing my rough-draft readover I think it'll stand at about 4,000 words.
There is Andy. On his knees. In the kitchen. That was enough to sway me over to the dark side, at least.
Teaser snippet under the cut. Adult-tastic and with a totally gratuitous use of science and popular culture. (Oh dear.)
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( Her fingers tighten in his hair. “I'm waiting.” )
